==> Sara. Perth. Soon to be Uni student, sworn rival: birds
==> I strongly recommend just clicking the Archive button down there, that's the fastest way you'll figure out who I am.
==> Homestuck, Anime (Attack on Titan is a big one), Fire Emblem, etc etc

I've just recently moved to Western Australia. If you are at all interested check out my #aussie adventures tag!



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==> Have fun.

 

ashwara:

for about 5seconds i was trying to be really careful and precise 

ashwara:

for about 5seconds i was trying to be really careful and precise 

Anonymous asked
So, this is an opening paragraph I've come up with for my story: "Whenever I walk into a room, all eyes can't help but be drawn to me, not because I'm drop-dead gorgeous or anything, but because I'm a freak. A silver-haired weirdo with bright green eyes. Despite contrary belief, I don't dye my hair. It's just naturally like that. But since I'm a poor orphan child, I can't even track down my parents and ask them about the genetic anomaly that has made my life a living hell." Any thoughts? :)

fuckyeahcharacterdevelopment:

I have thoughts, but my overarching thought is that the completion of the first paragraph is too soon to ask for crit/start revisions. Get at least a chapter down (preferably a whole story draft if you can) and then begin the rewriting process by asking for critique. 

-Evvy

I have thoughts. Avoid starting a story with a “this is why im special”. The Im-not-pretty-Im-just-unique-looking is alright (albeit a tad cliche) if its subtle but this is too in your face. Show them being insecure about it, wearing hats and glasses and their classmates still whispering or laughing. And maybe don’t spell out that they’re a poor orphan? I generally wouldn’t let my characters say “Im a rich foster kid”, I would make them act like a rich foster kid. Slow down a bit. This sounds more like a summary than an opening paragraph. 

feastings:

fe13 palette meme requests! i wanted to throw all the fes into one post but there were too many, so the older games will get their own post once i finish them all;;

couldnt resist having gerome and morgan match since theyre my precious kids :”)

nivalingreenhow:

when McGonagall finds out that Ginny is pregnant, and that the Weasley and Potter bloodlines will converge, she marks on her calender the day the child will turn 11 and that is the day she retires 

artisticpsychologist:

jeannakirschtein:

hophigh:

YOU GUYS TURN ON THE SUBTITLES

AHH I NEED A MINUTE

artisticpsychologist

HOLY FUCK TURN ON THE SUBTITLES

I REALLY AM IN A LESBIAN GHIBLI MOVIE HOLY SHIT

killertune:

Fire Emblem prints I’ll be selling at Fanime!

I’ll be at table #817 with Ybee and Rachiwi.